Wednesday, September 21, 2011

UNICORN!

There once was a friendly unicorn named George.  George loved to do all sorts of activities and unicorn games such as: sleeping, eating, ring toss, and pin the tail on the human.  George and his friends play all day and then go home each night to sleep.  One night, George did not come home.  George's parents called the unicorn police to report their missing son.  The police took to the sky in search of any site of George.  George's friends told the unicorn police that they just saw him when he was walking home, but that was all.

The search went nowhere for days.  George's parents were losing in hope that they would find their loving unicorn son. His parents did not know what to do with themselves.  George's mom started looking at his baby pictures and holding his blanket from when he was little.  His dad wept every night in hopes that their little boy would return home safely. 

The very next day, George's parents looked out the window and saw a shadowy figure on the horizon.  They ran outside to see it was their son.  George looked like he had not been missing for a week and had a smile on his face as he was trotting towards his parents.  When they finally embraced their son, George's parents asked their son where he had been.  His response was, "I was at unicorn camp.  Remember, you send me there every couple of years.  Did you think I was missing?".  George's parents, feeling embarrassed, quickly shook their head and said, "No honey, not at all." 

That night they all played games and ate cookies by the fireplace as if nothing had happened.  THE END

2 comments:

  1. Good use of imagination and nice twist ending. The are some short sentences that you might want to expand.

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  2. Hehe I like George :) Just continue to make sentences as active as possible

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